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Re: The Land of Gielinor - NOW COMPLETE - Now with bonus stories.
« Reply #15 on: July 02, 2018, 21:28:07 »
Sooooooo clever

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« Reply #16 on: July 02, 2018, 22:19:37 »
Great job with the writing!



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Re: The Land of Gielinor - NOW COMPLETE - Now with bonus stories.
« Reply #17 on: July 19, 2018, 16:53:09 »
I came here to say, that I’m quitting the game.
The day to day grind is getting rather lame.
It’s a big world, there’s always something to do
But It’s hard to keep playing knowing Jagex doesn’t have a clue

So here I am, saying I’m done
I’m going outside to have some fun.
Walk, run, maybe even a jump.
So I look less like a overgrown lump.

So I went outside, it was a beautiful day.
I didn’t have a single urge to play
You begin to think that quitting was a good move.
You start to see your mood improve.

We’ve all been here before, feels good right?
Who knew the sun was this goddamn bright?
And then it hits you, you start to get the itch.
Imagining what Scape would be like if you were filthy rich.

You start missing your friends that you spoke to everyday
Playing for an hour won’t hurt anyway.
And just like that, you’re back to square one.
But you PM all your friends, missing none

You play with a smile, feeling right at home.
You’re even excited to Scape on your phone.
You explore Gielinor, even stop and smell the flowers.
One of your friends reminds you it’s only been 24 hours.

Every now and again, it’s important to take a break.
But telling your friends you’re quitting is always a mistake.
Friends and Scape will always be there for you, it’s okay to admit.
It’s fine taking a break, but know it’s impossible to quit.

-Eltix

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Re: The Land of Gielinor - NOW COMPLETE - Now with bonus stories.
« Reply #18 on: July 19, 2018, 21:04:47 »
This is really good  \:D/ \:D/

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« Reply #19 on: July 20, 2018, 19:39:50 »
Very well done and relatable.
good read it was

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« Reply #20 on: July 21, 2018, 02:13:16 »
Good Job! enjoyed reading it! :D



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« Reply #21 on: July 23, 2018, 21:07:52 »
that is so true on all levels xxx

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Re: The Land of Gielinor - NOW COMPLETE - Now with bonus stories.
« Reply #22 on: July 24, 2018, 16:23:34 »
Well written and cam be so true

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Re: The Land of Gielinor - NOW COMPLETE - Now with bonus stories.
« Reply #23 on: August 10, 2018, 21:50:44 »
Okay, this isn't Rs related I'll say first off. Something happened recently and I do these rhymes when there's something going on, that's why there's so many of these god damn things. But this is a rhyme about me and my best friend. This is the only place I can put something like this so I'll just throw it in here. Enjoy, this was hard to write. But I needed get the lyrics out of my head. This is a true story.

Wake up, I take a look in the mirror,
See you in the corner, and my spine starts a shiver.
You take me back, to when we were in school,
only one glance for me, to become your fool.

Just like that was the start of it,
the fire in my heart never went unlit.
It felt like a story, the ones that start with once upon,
We spent years as friends from then on.

We grew even closer, and were one another’s first kiss,
I looked up at god asking, should I thank you for this?
A few seconds later you became my first love,
for the second time that night, I thanked the one above.

You opened your eyes and asked if I’d like to grow old together,
I answered with the first of many “always and forever”.
You were never truly mine; I was okay with that,
I was happy just watching Disney movies with you in your flat.

Sitting there saying stuff that we were going through,
after it all we both said that I’ll be there for you.
15 years in, it all started going wrong,
you started listening to the same old sad song.

I asked you if you were alright, you say that you’re okay;
I reminded her that’s what you always say.
Insecurity started to take over,
looking for warmth but she only grew colder.

With a tear in your eye, you give me a key chained white feather,
telling me to carry this, think of me, always and forever.
It was a summer day, a few weeks ago, it started to rain,
I got a call from your fiancé, saying you jumped in front of a train.

I don’t remember that much about the rest of the day, only the shiver,
I see you in the corner and turn away from the mirror.
Now look what you’ve done, why did have to leave?
You’ve left me all alone in my room to grieve.

You said we would be friends forever;
you left me needing you more than ever.
I think back in time, remembering old conversations,
even the ones where you came to me with nothing but complications.

You said we would grow old together.
You said we would be friends forever.
You said that we loved one another.
You said we would be there for each other.

You won’t be there for when I get married.
You’ll be 6 feet under buried.
You won’t be there for me when I have kids.
Ask you to babysit before me and my wife blow our lids.

You won’t be there for me when life gets hard.
We’ll never again exchange a Christmas and birthday card.
One day I’ll wake up, when I’m grey and wonder how does the time go,
Think of you and tell my kids about you and rock slow.

After telling the story, I’ll show them the white feather;
tell them why I’ll love her, always and forever.

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P.S in the middle of a RS one too!

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Re: The Land of Gielinor - NOW COMPLETE - Now with bonus stories.
« Reply #24 on: August 11, 2018, 09:45:50 »
This is so sad  :'( but beautiful, I hoe you are ok?

 :Hug:


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Re: The Land of Gielinor - NOW COMPLETE - Now with bonus stories.
« Reply #25 on: August 12, 2018, 14:55:24 »

This story is heartbreaking
But beautiful to read
Thank you for sharing
Unique you are indeed



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« Reply #26 on: September 16, 2018, 16:17:05 »
IDK what this one was, I was a work and bored, titled it 'Good Times' in my wordpad, so here's good times?


It’s been awhile since I wrote one of these.
I’m hoping it’ll flow like a seafront breeze.
I never know where to start, since I’ve told you my story.
How I rose and fell, looking for riches and glory.

Maybe something recent, something new and exciting?
But all I’ve done on the ironman is a lot of mining.
So I’ve got nothing to tell you, nothing to report.
No new stories, no moments, nothing of the sort.

After playing for years, I know I have so much more to tell.
But I can never remember seem to them very well.
I like talking about the past, so we can all relate.
When asking about Barrows KC would cause a debate.

That was a bad rhyme above, wouldn’t you say?
I’m referring to the mobs in the chest room we used to slay.
Remember? Getting higher KC meant a better chance at loot.
After getting nothing, you swear like a sailor and earn yourself a mute.

They were the good old times now weren’t they?
When everything was a mystery every time you play.
Remember the one about Pest Control?
When getting full void was an admiral goal.

I was once told, specing the portals spawned more spinners.
Looking back now everyone seems like beginners.
Spinning flax for hours, just for a bit of money.
We were such a noob back then, it’s getting more funny.

But anyway, I don’t know what this was. But I wanted to write something.
I haven’t written in a while so it’s better than nothing.
I’ll go back to stories, one with a bit more meaning.
But with that said, I bid you a good evening.


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« Reply #27 on: November 11, 2018, 20:39:13 »
Quick quickie whilst at work. Another 10 hours of work to go fml. Enjoy.

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I write these things for enjoyment
Alone, whilst sitting at work.
I cast my mind back to the joys of the game.
Too bring all that it read a smirk.

As you see I’m doing this different.
The others were getting stale.
Though I’m glad I wrote them in the way that I did
But it’s time to begin a new tale.

Where would you like us to go?
The world is ours to explore.
To the top of white wolf mountain?
Or to the deepest dungeoneering floor?

I’d advise against in going down there.
Though it’s getting rather nostalgic.
I’ve been doing some dung, so maybe I’ll tell you
How you splash with all styles but magic.

I’ve never wrote about Dungeoneering before,
I’ve hated since it released.
It shouldn’t be a skill, it’s more like a mini-game.
My love for it never increased.

Don’t even get me started on the skill doors.
Before everyone else was maxed.
Calling ‘97 Craft here’, ‘99 Herb there’
Nobody ever relaxed.

I open a door, and my eyes widened.
A Soulgazer floating right there.
Heart pounding for that Hexhunter bow
I could never get anything that rare.

I come to the end of the dungeon.
The boss is the only thing left to fight.
Before I enter room and finish the floor.
They kick me out of spite.

I find another group of other players.
Hoping they’re better than before.
The first room I enter saw a ferret.
I Alt-F4


 

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